Post by Aisu Kuri-mu on Feb 3, 2011 20:30:23 GMT -5
I want to say sorry because my English is not good 
Ikarudo walk outside to the fresh spring air, he sniffed the air (or water haha) and let out a sigh.
"It beautiful day." he said that is until Patorishiku chose to cannon ball in his garden, steam came out Ikarudo's ears as he walked to Patorishiku.
"Patorishikui! What you doing?!?" as Patorishiku sat there baka like drool coming from his mouth.
"I don't know." Patorishiku said as Ikarudo became more angry, that when he noticed that all his flowers were gone, and it was not because of Patorishiku's cannon ball.
Sorry this short. I hope you like it and help me improve my English by telling me what I did wrong.
Ikarudo walk outside to the fresh spring air, he sniffed the air (or water haha) and let out a sigh.
"It beautiful day." he said that is until Patorishiku chose to cannon ball in his garden, steam came out Ikarudo's ears as he walked to Patorishiku.
"Patorishikui! What you doing?!?" as Patorishiku sat there baka like drool coming from his mouth.
"I don't know." Patorishiku said as Ikarudo became more angry, that when he noticed that all his flowers were gone, and it was not because of Patorishiku's cannon ball.
Sorry this short. I hope you like it and help me improve my English by telling me what I did wrong.
