Post by carcrasher88 on Aug 25, 2009 18:27:24 GMT -5
Well, I've finally gotten off of my fanfiction hiatus, and I'm back! I've reorganized my writing style, and think I've made it a lot better! Here's chapter 1! Enjoy!
Chapter 1
“Letter to a Friend...or more?”
It was a calm, quiet Monday afternoon. There was a silence in the pineapple home of our favorite underwater sponge. What was Spongebob up to? Let's find out!
(Inside the pineapple)
Spongebob was sitting down at a table in his library.
“Oh, dear Neptune! I'm not sure if I can do this.” Spongebob exclaimed, looking down at the piece of paper in front of him. “C'mon Spongebob, you can do this. You two are already good friends. Heck, the only person that's more of a friend is Patrick, but that's because you've known each other since you were little kids.” He said to himself. He picked up his pencil, and started writing. When he was finished, he put it in an envelope, and left the pineapple to drop it off at it's destination.
(The next morning...)
A metal door opens, and a white envelope falls to the ground. A white-suited hand picks it up. Then, one could hear the envelope being torn open, then a voice starts to read...
To a friend
Ever since we met, I knew we'd likely become the best of friends.
Immediately, I found myself risking my neck to make an impression.I nearly let myself die, just to be around you.I kinda learned a lesson that day, and then found myself making a fool of myself soon after.You seemed to enjoy it at first, but you got tired of it quickly.
Soon enough, I was on the verge of losing my first new friend in a long time.But, when I learned my lesson, in the form of song, you quickly forgave me.Then, I started to feel like a wimp. I tried to make myself seem different, but failed trying.One of the worst times, though, was when I almost let what we have in common nearly cost me my job.Fortunately, we solved that problem, with a solution that everyone was happy with.
Then, there were times where I didn't mean to risk my life to try and impress you, I felt like I was forced to. Nonetheless, things worked out in the end. As time passed, and we got to know each other better, I feel we've grown extremely close. Not only that, I feel we could become more than that. The problem is, even as we become better friends, I feel that we're still worlds apart. Also, I know what my other friends would think.
I've already talked to Patrick about it. He said it'd be good for me. What I'm not so sure of, is how my family would take it. I know my grandma would be proud of me. My cousin, Stanley could handle it, and my uncle, Cap'n Blue, would be too lazy to care. It's my parents that make me uneasy. I guess there's only one way to say this...
Then, another voice finishes with the last line...
“Sandy, I love you.”
The letter lowers down, revealing Spongebob standing there, with a slightly embarrassed look on his face.
“Spongebob, I had no idea, I...” Sandy started, but she couldn't finish what she was going to say.
“You what?” asked Spongebob, confused.
“I guess what I'm trying to say is...I've kinda felt the same way for a long time.” Sandy responded.
“Really?” asked Spongebob.
“Yeah. I know that the separation between water and air is a strong drawback, but I'll try to get by that obstacle.” said Sandy, with a smile on her face. “I've got some calls to make, I'll see you later.”
She walked over and gave him a hug. Then, she walked back into the treedome, and went to make her calls.
(Later that evening, at the pineapple...)
There's a knock at the door. Spongebob walks over to answer. He opens the door.
“Hey, Spongebob.” It was Sandy. But, there was something that shocked Spongebob. She wasn't wearing her air suit and helmet.
“Sandy? Where's your suit?” Spongebob asked.
“Oh, that old thing? I don't need it anymore! You remember when I said I needed to make some calls?” she asked.
“Yeah.” Spongebob responded.
“Well, one of those calls was to my bosses. I explained my situation, and they said they had a solution. They came by as quickly as they could, and they gave me these green pills.” She showed him a box of green pills. “These pills allow me to breath underwater, and they'll also let you breath air.” She explained.
“Wow, really? Can I have one?” Spongebob asked, excited.
“Sure thing, Spongebob! Here.” She gave him one. He gladly took the pill, not caring how bad it tasted. “By the way, that one pill alone will take a permanent effect. That means that'll be the only one of those you'll ever need to take!” Sandy explained.
“That's great!” Spongebob said, enthusiastically.
There was a silence for about 5 minutes.
“So, I also came by to ask if I could stay over here, with you tonight.” said Sandy, with a grin, lowering her eyelids when she said it.
Spongebob knew that look. He was a bit worried, but knew he couldn't resist.
“Sure you can, Sandy. What's mine is yours.” He moved aside to let her in. He realized he'd have a lot to “prove” tonight.
End Chapter 1
Chapter 1
“Letter to a Friend...or more?”
It was a calm, quiet Monday afternoon. There was a silence in the pineapple home of our favorite underwater sponge. What was Spongebob up to? Let's find out!
(Inside the pineapple)
Spongebob was sitting down at a table in his library.
“Oh, dear Neptune! I'm not sure if I can do this.” Spongebob exclaimed, looking down at the piece of paper in front of him. “C'mon Spongebob, you can do this. You two are already good friends. Heck, the only person that's more of a friend is Patrick, but that's because you've known each other since you were little kids.” He said to himself. He picked up his pencil, and started writing. When he was finished, he put it in an envelope, and left the pineapple to drop it off at it's destination.
(The next morning...)
A metal door opens, and a white envelope falls to the ground. A white-suited hand picks it up. Then, one could hear the envelope being torn open, then a voice starts to read...
To a friend
Ever since we met, I knew we'd likely become the best of friends.
Immediately, I found myself risking my neck to make an impression.I nearly let myself die, just to be around you.I kinda learned a lesson that day, and then found myself making a fool of myself soon after.You seemed to enjoy it at first, but you got tired of it quickly.
Soon enough, I was on the verge of losing my first new friend in a long time.But, when I learned my lesson, in the form of song, you quickly forgave me.Then, I started to feel like a wimp. I tried to make myself seem different, but failed trying.One of the worst times, though, was when I almost let what we have in common nearly cost me my job.Fortunately, we solved that problem, with a solution that everyone was happy with.
Then, there were times where I didn't mean to risk my life to try and impress you, I felt like I was forced to. Nonetheless, things worked out in the end. As time passed, and we got to know each other better, I feel we've grown extremely close. Not only that, I feel we could become more than that. The problem is, even as we become better friends, I feel that we're still worlds apart. Also, I know what my other friends would think.
I've already talked to Patrick about it. He said it'd be good for me. What I'm not so sure of, is how my family would take it. I know my grandma would be proud of me. My cousin, Stanley could handle it, and my uncle, Cap'n Blue, would be too lazy to care. It's my parents that make me uneasy. I guess there's only one way to say this...
Then, another voice finishes with the last line...
“Sandy, I love you.”
The letter lowers down, revealing Spongebob standing there, with a slightly embarrassed look on his face.
“Spongebob, I had no idea, I...” Sandy started, but she couldn't finish what she was going to say.
“You what?” asked Spongebob, confused.
“I guess what I'm trying to say is...I've kinda felt the same way for a long time.” Sandy responded.
“Really?” asked Spongebob.
“Yeah. I know that the separation between water and air is a strong drawback, but I'll try to get by that obstacle.” said Sandy, with a smile on her face. “I've got some calls to make, I'll see you later.”
She walked over and gave him a hug. Then, she walked back into the treedome, and went to make her calls.
(Later that evening, at the pineapple...)
There's a knock at the door. Spongebob walks over to answer. He opens the door.
“Hey, Spongebob.” It was Sandy. But, there was something that shocked Spongebob. She wasn't wearing her air suit and helmet.
“Sandy? Where's your suit?” Spongebob asked.
“Oh, that old thing? I don't need it anymore! You remember when I said I needed to make some calls?” she asked.
“Yeah.” Spongebob responded.
“Well, one of those calls was to my bosses. I explained my situation, and they said they had a solution. They came by as quickly as they could, and they gave me these green pills.” She showed him a box of green pills. “These pills allow me to breath underwater, and they'll also let you breath air.” She explained.
“Wow, really? Can I have one?” Spongebob asked, excited.
“Sure thing, Spongebob! Here.” She gave him one. He gladly took the pill, not caring how bad it tasted. “By the way, that one pill alone will take a permanent effect. That means that'll be the only one of those you'll ever need to take!” Sandy explained.
“That's great!” Spongebob said, enthusiastically.
There was a silence for about 5 minutes.
“So, I also came by to ask if I could stay over here, with you tonight.” said Sandy, with a grin, lowering her eyelids when she said it.
Spongebob knew that look. He was a bit worried, but knew he couldn't resist.
“Sure you can, Sandy. What's mine is yours.” He moved aside to let her in. He realized he'd have a lot to “prove” tonight.
End Chapter 1
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