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Post by Erin on Apr 9, 2008 6:46:03 GMT -5
Ok so here's my idea for the sequel to the movie Here's Part 1: Spongebob stood in front of his pineapple home. As saw his bestest friend in the whole world go away in a small moving van.. He thought to him self.. "I can't believe my BESTEST friend moved away!" He started crying a big puddle of tears.. He said with tears in his eyes. "Who will I be able to hang out with with?" He cried more and more.. "Who is there really?" He looked around looking for something he could do now that his bestest friend had now moved away. He then glanced at the treedome. His eyes lite up with glee. Maybe I could spend some time with Sandy!" He giggled.And quickly put on his water helmet.He then hopped over to the treedome in excitement. He knocked at the door. Sandy opened the door and smiled as she as she saw Spongebob at her door."Howdy Spongebob!" She then frowned when she saw Spongebob's sad expression painted across his face. "What's wrong?" Spongebob sniffed as another tear rolled down his face."Patrick--he--MOVED AWAY!!" He started brawling again..She looked at him with sympathy aw that's terrible!" He sniffed again. "I know!" He cried again.. Sandy bit her lip. "Well, if you want--" "I guess I could spend some time with you--" But as soon as she could even finish her sentence. Spongebob had already tightly hugged her as much as he could. "Oh thank you Sandy!" Sandy then smiled at him. She patted his back gently."Oh, don't mention it.." Ok that's Part 1 ;D Post if you want to see Part 2!  |
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Post by usamerican on Apr 9, 2008 11:08:51 GMT -5
Brilliant! This is already so much better than the first movie! ;D Good Job Pixie! |
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Post by Erin on Apr 9, 2008 15:33:35 GMT -5
Hehehe ^^ Part 2 is coming soon! ;D So don't worry!  |
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Post by usamerican on Apr 9, 2008 23:24:37 GMT -5
Three cheers for Pixie! Hip-hip Hurray! Hip-hip Hurray! Hip-hip Hurray!"
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Post by Erin on Apr 10, 2008 6:05:11 GMT -5
Ok here's Part 2:
Spongebob casually held Sandy's hand, as he dragged her along to the Krusty Krab. "So Patrick said he wanted to move closer to his family! Isn't it sad? I mean, the only family he has left are his parents! And his brother went to..."
Sandy sighed, and smiled, listening to the cute little sponge's incessant babbling. He talked about Patrick this, and Patrick that...she really felt bad for the poor little dude, and just hoped she could help.
"Well, here we are!" He pulled her up to the door of the Krusty Krab.
"Thanks, Spongebob! But...why are we here? Shouldn't we be out in Jellyfish Feilds, or something?"
"Well normally...but Patrick and I used to come here for Krabby Patties every day around four!" His eyes began to water up, and he clutched onto Sandy's arm. "Oh...I miss Patrick!" He started up sobbing and crying again.
Sandy patted him on the back affectionately. "There, there." She said, quietly. "I know it's sad, and it can hurt...but best friends sometimes move away. It's a fact of life...and you kinda have to learn to accept it."
Spongebob sniffed, and wiped tears away from his eyes with his arm. "Yeah, I guess you're right." He sniffed again, and brightened. "Okay...let's go get those Krabby Patties!
"But Spongebob, I just had lun--" She couldn't even finish the sentence.
"Come on!"
Sandy sighed. She had a feeling this would be a long, difficult summer. Oh well, she thought. As long as I keep poor Spongebob happy...
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Post by usamerican on Apr 10, 2008 10:53:19 GMT -5
I don't want to sound redundant, but this is again brilliant! Your story fits very well with the series because SpongeBob is really that attached (unfortunately) to Patrick and Sandy would do something like this for SpongeBob.
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Post by Erin on Apr 10, 2008 14:29:02 GMT -5
YAY! So you really like it? SWEETNESS!!! ;D
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Post by Muffin on Apr 10, 2008 18:19:04 GMT -5
You're doing great with the paragraph style, Pixie!
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Post by Erin on Apr 10, 2008 20:27:17 GMT -5
^^ Aw man..  Ok here's Part 3: (But I'm not so sure if its gonna be as good as Part 2..  ) Part 3: Later on at the Krusty Krab, Spongebob was behind the grill flipping burgers. While Sandy sat at a near by table. A costumer walked over to cash register. Squidward was boredly looking at his magazine. He then looked over at the customer. "May I help you?" The customer then looked back him, as Squidward took a quick glance back at his magazine, the customer slowly responded. "Yes..." "I'd like a Krabby Patty...” Squidward then looked back at customer. Spongebob as usual fetched up the Krabby patty as quick as possible. Squidward just rolled his eyes as he gave the customer his meal. Squidward then quick looked at Sandy for a sec. "Spongebob...” Spongebob then popped out from behind the grill to the window.” Yes...” Squidward then snicker at him. He then pointed to Sandy.” Why is your girlfriend here?!" Spongebob ignoring his comment then answered as to why Sandy was there. "Oh, well she here because PATRICK MOVED AWAY!" He started to sob again. Squidward then slammed his head on the cash register. "Why do I even ask?!" Spongebob then just decided to get back to work. But soon eventually closing time finally came around. Sandy then got up from her table. As she was about to exit Spongebob then opened the door for her.” After you mad’ am...” She looked at him nervously. "Uh--Thanks...” She then walked outside the Krusty Krab doors. "Look, Spongebob...” Spongebob got in front of her. With tears in his eyes from crying so much. "Yes?" Sandy then saw the sorrow in eyes. She then looked away from him. She then bit her lip. "Nothing...” Spongebob then slightly smiled. "Well I had the most FANTASTIC day ever!" "All cause I spent the almost the WHOLE day with you.." Sandy then looked back at him with concern. Spongebob then frowned. "Didn't you--" "Have a good time?" He starts to cry again. Sandy feeling sorry for him. "No, no!" "I mean.." "I had a GREAT time with you!" She gave him a slight smile. Spongebob then lighted up. "Great!" "That I guess that means will be able to the EXACT same thing TOMMROW!" Sandy then light up with shock. "Tomorrow?!" Spongebob walked back home. As he called out. "YEP!" Sandy nevrously smiled. "Tomorrow...” "Heh...” "Can't wait...” |
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Post by usamerican on Apr 11, 2008 1:03:31 GMT -5
Pixie, you are an amazing fan fiction writer. I really like your story! Part 3 is excellent! If I was your English teacher I would give you an A+ for what I've seen so far.
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Post by Muffin on Apr 11, 2008 6:20:29 GMT -5
LOL! Yeah, it's really good ^^ I NEED to post my diary story on FF.net...
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Post by Erin on Apr 11, 2008 6:21:39 GMT -5
YAY! ;D I'm SO happy! (Does the happy dance.) |
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Post by Erin on Apr 13, 2008 14:41:03 GMT -5
I know we've been waiting here's
Part 4:
The next day passed, and the entire sequence of events was monotonously repeated. Sandy felt as though her head would fly off and explode! Sure, she enjoyed spending time with Spongebob, but this was ridiculous!
As evening drew near, Sandy decided to speak up. "Um...Spongebob?" She interrupted, gently.
"Yes?" Spongebob stopped his giddy chatter, and looked up at her, expectantly.
Sandy bit her lip. "You think that maybe..."
His blue eyes sparkled, and a smile was glued crookedly to his face.
She sighed. She couldn't just tell him to lay off! It would be selfish, and unkind, and...well, friendship is about sacrifice, right? "You think that maybe tomorrow we could have a picnic at the park? I mean, it is Friday, and it seems wrong to do the same thing on a weekend as on a weekday!" She pasted a happy look on.
Spongebob brightened. "That's an excellent idea! I'll see you then, Sandy!"
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Post by usamerican on Apr 13, 2008 14:46:41 GMT -5
You did an excellent job of describing Sandy's emotions
The ending reminds me of the episode "Dying for Pie" as Squidward was losing patience with SpongeBob, but didn't want to break his heart.
If I was your English teacher I would still give you an A+. I would even put a strawberry sticker on your paper.
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Post by Erin on Apr 13, 2008 15:25:17 GMT -5
D'awww!!! ^^ Thanks ;D
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