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Post by usamerican on Apr 18, 2008 9:57:23 GMT -5
Yes, you should have Sandy meet Julian. They can both fight over SpongeBob!
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Post by Erin on Apr 19, 2008 6:38:34 GMT -5
Yes..
Patrick: "GIRL FIGHT!" (Jumps up excited)
Pixie: "Not yet.."
Patrick: "Darn.." (Eats a krabby patty out of nowhere.)
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Post by usamerican on Apr 19, 2008 12:01:14 GMT -5
Yes.. Patrick: "GIRL FIGHT!" (Jumps up excited) Pixie: "Not yet.." Patrick: "Darn.." (Eats a krabby patty out of nowhere.) usamerican: "When did Patrick become a girl? Did Patrick move away from Bikini Bottom so he could go to a place where he could get the surgery that turns a guy into a girl?"  (then bashes Patrick in the head with a pillow full of bricks) |
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Post by CrimsonFlameWolf on Apr 19, 2008 23:28:57 GMT -5
Yes.. Patrick: "GIRL FIGHT!" (Jumps up excited) Pixie: "Not yet.." Patrick: "Darn.." (Eats a krabby patty out of nowhere.) usamerican: "When did Patrick become a girl? Did Patrick move away from Bikini Bottom so he could go to a place where he could get the surgery that turns a guy into a girl?" (then bashes Patrick in the head with a pillow full of bricks) Um, I think Pixie means that Patrick wants to watch a girl fight... Story Comments: This is an amazing story you've got going here. And you captured the emotions of Spongebob and Sandy in Part 6 incredibly well! |
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Post by Erin on Apr 20, 2008 11:05:57 GMT -5
Pixie: "YAY!" "Part 9 may be a while.."
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Post by usamerican on Apr 20, 2008 11:28:19 GMT -5
No problem...it's a treat for us to be able to read your story.
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Post by Erin on Apr 20, 2008 14:58:09 GMT -5
D'aww that's so sweet  |
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Post by Erin on Apr 29, 2008 20:35:32 GMT -5
FINNALLY! Here's Part 9! ;D
Part 9:
The next day, at preciously 7:00 A.M. Spongebob jumped out of bed excited as ever to hang out Julia again. He rushed out the door, only to meet none other then Sandy Cheeks; as mad as ever. She yelled out at him. "Do you mind explaining to me where the heck you were yesterday?!" Spongebob then recalled all of the events of yesterday in his mind. "Oh my goodness, I’m SO sorry Sandy!" "I totally forgot about our movie date!"
Sandy then folded her arms. "Well it doesn't matter now...” "Because obviously you have more important things to do other then spending time me!" She started to storm off mad. Spongebob tried to stop her. But it was no use she had already had stormed off to the treedome.
Spongebob had then frowned because he had felt he had lost yet another friend. But hey at least he still had Julia, who speaking of which was outside watering her plants. Spongebob had then decided to go over there and hang with her for awhile since no one else was there for him. He then greeted Julia again. She gave him a warm smile. "Hey Spongebob...” "What's up?" Spongebob gave her a slight smile...” "Aw, nothing much...” "What about you?" Julia brushed the dirt from her clothes.” Nothing really, I was just taking care of my plants...” She lighted up, and gave him a big smile. "Say can I tell you a secret?"
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Post by usamerican on Apr 29, 2008 23:30:03 GMT -5
Thanks for showing us Part 9!  SpongeBob is insane! Sandy should be angry at SpongeBob! I am very curious to find out Julia's secret! Maybe Julia likes Squidward... |
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Post by Erin on Apr 30, 2008 6:09:24 GMT -5
Hmm... Well actually I was thinking she was tell him that she was royalty.
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Post by usamerican on Apr 30, 2008 9:55:48 GMT -5
That's a pretty good secret. I wonder how SpongeBob will react to this secret
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Post by Erin on Apr 30, 2008 14:27:30 GMT -5
He'd probably faint.. Oh and just to let you know, Julia likes Spongebob.. Not Squidward. hehe  So because She's royalty it by law she has to MARRY Spongebob. ! |
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Post by Erin on May 2, 2008 20:33:22 GMT -5
Ok here's Part 10: ;D
A playful look crossed Spongebob's face. "Sure, I love secrets!" he exclaimed loudly.
Julia giggled. "Hush, silly! Now, come on inside and I'll tell you."
The two walked into the mermaid's small home and sat down at the table, where Julia proceeded to serve a few scones and some iced tea.
Once their bellies were satisfied, Julia leaned back and sighed. "Now Spongebob, you have to PROMISE you won't tell anyone."
"I promise! What's so important, anyway?"
Julia's voice got even lower. "You see, my mom is King Neptune's sister, which means that Neptune is my uncle."
Spongebob leaned back a little bit. "How's that a secret?" He asked. "You should be proud of your royal descent!"
Julia bit her lip. "Yeah but, you see...that means that I have to get married before I turn 18."
"Well, that seems a little young...but is it a problem? I mean--you're a beautiful young girl, and you're royal!" Spongebob shrugged a little. "I mean, when do you turn 18 anyway?"
She ran her finger along the patterns on the table. "Three days."
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Post by usamerican on May 2, 2008 20:39:38 GMT -5
Outstanding job Pixie! I like how the dialog was written in this chapter. It sounds like SpongeBob is going to be faced with some major decisions in the next few chapters. Again... Great work Pixie!
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Post by Erin on May 2, 2008 20:45:54 GMT -5
YAY I LOVE POSITIVE FEED-BACK! ;D
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